Last week I mentioned
the importance of character names. Superficial as we are, we draw a lot of
meaning out of names. And consider who your character is named after? Who named him, mom or dad? Does she have a name that indicates parental
personality expectations? Chastity? Felicity?
And has your character grown into her name, or taken a stance in opposition
to it, like fictional adventurer Modesty Blaise?
Last names, of course,
often indicate nationality with all the assumptions they bring. If you have a fellow named Patrick O’Connor
and he isn’t Irish, you’d better tell us quickly, because we’ve already slotted
him. And in fact if he isn’t, there’s a
story there that will tell us a good deal about him.
Similarly, nicknames
tell us a lot about your character, but we need to know if he took the nick
himself or if someone stuck him with it.
If you introduce me to Tiny I expect a giant. If her pals call her
brain, she might be the one who always has a plan, or she might be an
idiot. Either way, the fact that she
accepted that nickname tells us about her confidence level and self-image.
It’s best to show
character thru actions, and not just in thrillers. Explore the character’s
hobbies, unusual talents and pet peeves.
Readers love to read about people who like the movies they like, read
the books they read, or love the same foods they love. We all have little quirks, bad habits and odd
compulsions. If your character always
salts his food, twists a lock of her hair when she’s nervous or checks his
e-mail six times a day, people will both relate to that and remember that.
Consider post war
detective Nero Wolfe spoke little and kept his feelings to himself. He wasn’t
even the point of view character. Yet he seemed like an old friend to some
readers for two reasons. His author, Rex
Stout, meticulously detailed his loving care of the orchids he cultivated, and
he showed you, in great detail, Wolfe’s gourmet eating habits AND love of a
good beer.
Wolfe exemplifies the
concept that good characters must have both common traits and some unusual
ones. Remember this: ordinary things (like wanting a beer with lunch) make a
character believable. Unique traits (like cultivating orchids in Manhattan) make
a character memorable.
Next week I’ll share
how good acting advice can help writers.
